My feedback from other first drafts - Connect 4

There is evidence of X in the creative use of most of the following technical skills.	Level 1- Minimal 0-23	Level 2 – Basic 24-35	Level 3 – Proficient 36-47	Level 4 – Excellent 48-60
Holding a shot steady where appropriate				The shots are very steady where they need to be.
Framing a shot, including and excluding elements as appropriate			As it is in modern times this is made quite easy.
Using a variety of shots and distances			I found that only really mid shots and close ups were really used. The opening lacked a long shot.
Using titles appropriately (consider font, colour, length on screen, order)				The titles were all in order and the way they were done were very inventive.
Selecting mise en scene including colour, figure, lighting, objects and setting				The mise en scene in the summer house area shed thing was really good.
Editing so that meaning is apparent to the viewer			The editing was really good.
Using varied shot transitions and other effects selectively		Not many shot transitions happened throughout.
Using sound with images and editing			The whole idea of the voiceover is really good, it’s just that at some points it’s not clear what is being said.
Grading and Comments-  www/ebi (I really liked/ The film opening would be so much better if)	Overall the opening is really good and the way that the tittles have been done are really good and creative. I just don’t feel as though the story is very clear and not many different shots were used.